Studies in Sobriety Poetics Donate.
         
  The Five+ Afrikaans is a new style of poetry. It's like Haiku - but it's not veiled and very direct and upfront, which is honourable in itself. Take it as the Elders making a comment on somebody or a situation which demands attention and then have a Mandingo Dunk on me.  

FivE+ Afrikaans Spake -

 

 

The reason for the form - it shows you gave it thought before you spoke and also recognize It's only an opinion and point of view amongst others. Not everything can be said - but you have to say what you can with it and be direct with it, even if there's room for ambiguity, but as to not waste others time trying to figure out what you mean.

Speak Your Mind, Not Emotions - Syllable Metric form :

 (6) 

(5)

 (6)

(5)

 (5)

(?)  [         ] of Afrikaans.

 

 

I. Meanwhile in America.

 Overrated currency
of sports and pretend
  to be music, talent,
to rob thy neighbour
  n' blame him for it --
? Shame of Afrikaans.

 

II Meanwhile in China.

 The love of money
is others poverty
  blame the audience
without any talents,
  for the artists death --
? Guilty of Afrikaans.


  P.s - they told me it was gastronomie.But i'm a horrible chef and a decent poet. I'll go for the latter. <3    
 
         
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